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Nancy Hendon's avatar

You eloquently described what I have been unable to say for decades.

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Taylor Allyn's avatar

Nancy, I really appreciate you saying that. Some things sit in us for a long time before we can get them into words. I’m glad something in this piece helped name what you’ve been carrying.

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Kathleen Gubbins's avatar

This is all so chilling - your poem, the pattern recognition, the cold bureaucratic calculations. There’s a lot to unpack in what you’ve written. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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Taylor Allyn's avatar

I am glad you felt the chill in it because that is exactly what I felt writing it. None of this is easy to look at, and writing it was its own kind of heaviness. The hardest part was admitting how familiar the pattern felt in my own body. When you have lived through a system’s cold math, you recognize it faster than you want to. I appreciate you taking the time to sit with it, and I am grateful you are willing to stay in the conversation instead of stepping back from it.

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Susan Martin's avatar

I am stunned by the clarity you have exposed. Yes, there are patterns that can be seen throughout history that simply erase people who are not accepted fully as humans. We have multiple examples in American history, but this is worldwide. Oh my God. May we somehow see the patterns. In the Bible, this would be the powers and principalities that contain evil. Perhaps we can begin to stop scapegoating people and see the wider picture so that we can be more effective in fighting the evil. Thank you so much for helping my heart break so that God can enter.

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Taylor Allyn's avatar

Thank you for sharing all of this with such openness. Once you start seeing the pattern, you realize how many forms it takes and how long it has been with us. I really appreciate the way you brought your own frame to it, especially the call to see more clearly so we do less harm. I’m grateful the piece met you in that way. 🙏🏾

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